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Combat HIV by Sex Education

           More than sixty million people in this whole world have been infected with HIV. And approximately twenty million adults and children died because of HIV. In this era without any preventive action, that amount is not impossible to increase more and more. This essay will persuade you all to support the sex education to be a curriculum from junior high school student to the senior high school student around the world. This action will very useful to prevent the HIV disease and of course to help more than a million people in this world. And we know that there is no cure for HIV, because of that there will be impossible to us to give treatment to the people who have HIV-infected, and sex education will be the great preventive action to prevent the HIV disease.

            Before we enter the writer’s argument, let’s we start with some definition. First, what is HIV? HIV (Human Immunodeficiency Virus) is a virus that causes Acquired Immunodeficiency Syndrome (AIDS), a condition in humans in which progressive failure the immune system. This disease is no cure. And this disease automatically will bring the victim into the death. Transmission of HIV can be done by using needle that has been contaminated, parental transmission, moreover based on WHO data at least 60%-70% HIV, transmitted by sexual relations. Second, what is sex education? Sex education instruction on issues relating to human sexuality, including human sexual anatomy, sexual reproduction, sexual intercourse, reproductive health, emotional relations, reproductive rights and responsibilities, abstinence, birth control, and other aspects of human sexual behavior. So, sexual education actually has a relationship with HIV. How to start that action? First, when it have been a curriculum, start with give the reliable teacher some important material. And give/buy to the student the sexual education textbook, without negative picture that just contain the positive thing to make a great world without HIV.

            Like we told before, in this essay we want to introduce to you all, how big the profit that the world will get if the sexual education be a curriculum in Junior High School until Senior High School. Why must in Junior High School until Senior High School? Because, in that age we are going to enter the adolescence. And in that time, we will be an unstable teenager, moreover we will feel want to try anything not and not impossible about sex. So, the sex education will teach what is the dangerous of sex, how to take care our virginity, and at the end of the day, when they are mature enough, they have know what is the safe sex. And that action of course will decrease the unsafe sexual, and automatically will decrease the amount of victim of HIV.

            Why must be a curriculum? Even though parent can do that too? Of course parents have a great deal of responsibility of raising their children. But that is really not making sense if parent teach their children about sexuality. And in some case, we know that not all parents understand all the safe sexuality. And if that happened their children will don’t know at all about how is the safe sex. Because of that school is the most reliable media to teach about the sex education to the teenager. And sex education mandatory or be a curriculum at school is effective has been proven by the Western countries. Because Sex education has been taught in schools in a range of countries around the world for nearly a century in various forms it has become a fixture in schools in most Western countries. And if it can be success in Western countries. Why the other not do that too. Moreover it have some benefits. And we know that by doing sex education we are not only decrease the amount HIV victims, but we can decrease the other sexually disease too. Not only disease, but we can also decrease the amount of unwanted pregnancy. And if we have decrease unwanted pregnancy we also have decrease the amount of the people who died because of abortion.

            Because of several positive effects above, we believe that the sexual education from the Junior High School into the Senior High School is very effective preventive action to save more than a million people in this whole world.